The Ebola outbreak is spreading and it
must to be stopped now. The time is passing and every day the disease is
spreading, increasing the number of victims.
Despite the
efforts of health workers from the affected countries and elsewhere, cases of
Ebola will continue to increase, Frieden said.
The area affected for the virus must to
be isolated and specialists forward to the local of high contamination for help
the patients and raise awareness. Lack of awareness is one of the causes of the
increase in the number of infected.
If no action is taken now, the disease
will spread more and more, and the Ebola outbreak can become global.
Tiago, you have offered a clear opinion and response to the piece you read, but you have not cited or linked the article. Also, you mention the name Friedan who is interviewed for the article, but you do not mention the author of the article. These are important parts of an analytical paragraph. Also, keep in my that the blog assignment requests approximately 250 words, elaborate on your ideas.
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